Pada cuti sekolah yang lalu,saya da

Pada cuti sekolah yang lalu,saya dan keluarga mahu bercuti ke Kuala Lumpur dengan menaiki kereta.
Kami bertolak pada pukul 7 pagi.Kami bersarapan di rumah. Kami berasa sangat gembira.dalam beberapa jam kemudian kami pun tiba di Kuala Lumpur. Disana terdapat banyak bangunan yang tinggi.kemudian,kami pergi ke bangunan pencakar langit.kami berasa teruja dan gembira.

Keputusan (Inggeris) 1:

During school holidays, the family and I like to vacation to the city centre by car. We leave at 7 am. We have breakfast at home. We are very happy in a couple of hours later we already arrived in Kuala Lumpur. There are many high buildings. later, we went to skyscrapers. we are excited and happy.

Keputusan (Inggeris) 2:

In the last school holidays, my family and I wanted a vacation to Kuala Lumpur by car.
We left at 7 morning.We breakfast at home. We felt very gembira.dalam few hours later we arrived in Kuala Lumpur. There are many buildings that tinggi.kemudian, we went to skyscrapers langit.kami feel excited and happy.